How To Play Fireboy & Watergirl

A procedural text writing that instructs you what do something or how to do something,so for my class we had to write a procedural text about one of our favourite internet games. 

Monster University

If you remember as a kid you may have heard of the movie "Monsters Inc" the movie about why monster are in your closet and why they scare you,well now they have finally made the second movie to it a prequel "Monster University" so as usual Mike Wazowski will be in the movie and so will James P Sullivan and it will be about how they went to college to get to Monster Inc because obviously you need a education before you get a job.  

Snow

The Gentle touch as it drift down to his head,

and rest upon it like a soft warm bed.

Soft and pearly white,

it glow in the moon light.

White doesn't make it seem plain,

but as it starts to rain.

It crumbles to the slightest touch,

but doesn't suffer any pain.

Tomorrow is another day,

and the snow will come back to play.

Fire

Fire isn't just something for destruction.

Fire can keep your family warm over cold winter night.

Fire isn't something you turn to as a bad things after your anger is in a fight.

Fire is a flower that can bloom into something beautiful when cared for.

Fire is not a weapon of anger.

Fire dances across the wood it burn in the fire place.

And slowly dies down with grace.

My Nephew

My Nephew is a small little mouse but with a strong and brave personality,much like Despereaux the little mouse with a dangerous and brave personality.

But unlike Despereaux and facing huge humans(well sort of) my nephews takes on my dog 2x bigger than himself,climbing to the top of our stools and using all his energy running back and forward from the end of the house.There are time when his baby self comes back and just wants to go to his mummy and stay by her side all the time but it's very rare only if he has been away from her too long.

Even though Despereaux was a brave mouse some feared he might put them in danger but with my nephew we're afraid he might be a little bit too brave and might hurt himself but hasn't been there.

He is a hyper little mouse rushing around everywhere he goes and always has a smile on his face.

Friendship

Someone very wise once said "Best Friends are like four leaf clovers hard to find but lucky to have".

Having Friend are lucky to have and are sometimes hard to find as I just said before but some of you might not agree with me but really it is.When I was younger my friends came and went so to find Best friend was something special for me and maybe even others.

Friends come and go,and you may come and go.

But friends are always there for you when you need them,

and you are always there for them when they need you.

Friendship isn't just a word.

You and your friend are a ship,

and to keep a float you need trust,care and kindness.

Making Life A Bit Too Easy

Washing Machine,Dish Washer and Cars all things that make your life easy ,but the thing is are we making life a bit too easy?

I mean life is hard and it is a nice feeling to sit back and relax,but now we're making things such as a vacuum that can do the cleaning for you all you have to do is press a button and that is it and making a T.V that doesn't need you pressing buttons at all.

You never know making life easier also might make us lazier even for the simplest things.Our future can still be good if we don't let some things like this get to us.

Synonym Practise

This week we were practising our synonyms to refresh our memory of them so we can use them more in our written work next term.

Mother Nature's Changes

Her heart can't stand the pain of our Towers digging into her.

Her Lungs can't bare to breath our toxic smoke that is created from our machines.

Her hands can't seem to feel her soft grass that once lay in them.

Her Ears can't hear her bird chirping only our machinery roars.

And now her can't eye's can't see her forest only one made out of concrete.

Don't Look Down!

This week for our narrative practise we were given a sentence to use in our story and carry on from it and this was our sentence "I panicked as I looked..." and this is what I wrote.

I strapped myself into the seat and waited for the movement soon to come,people around seemed to have the same feeling but covered with fake excitement.The button was pushed and my feet started to dangle  and the ground underneath me started to disappear,was this really going to be as bad as my sister said it would be?Slowly the people waiting at the bottom started to get smaller and my view of the world started to get bigger,my stomach started to feel like it was hanging in bag waiting to drop.My legs felt like stone and my arms were nailed to my straps.

Finally at the top and the view was amazing sadly I knew I wasn't going to see it any longer but I panicked as I looked at the same time,my train of thought was then interrupted by a boy’s high pitched scream of excitement.

Any moment now.... “Ahhhhhhh!” screamed on the boy.....1....2....3.....The sudden drop made my stomach fly up from out of its bag and into the sky  it was lost and couldn't feel it ,my eye were shut but still seemed that I could see the rushing colour fly up.It quickly came to a stop and my eye were open and could feel the ground again and my stomach.

I stepped off and headed towards my group we went back to the centre of Rainbows End and I headed towards my cousin .

“Just came back from the Fear  Fall.” I said with no expression in my voice.

“ Sweet, you know when I was down here I could hear a screaming girl man felt sorry for what ride she was on.”she answered.

“Really!?”

By Salome

It was the strangest thing I ever saw....

This week for our practise narrative test we were given a sentence to use in our story and carry on from it,our sentence was "It was the strangest thing I ever saw.."and this is what I wrote.

We all hoped in the back of the trucks boot and waited for the engine to start the sound of the engine made the truck vibrate  under our feet,and the truck moved forward  moving toward the gate.The air turned cool as it rushed past our faces and the hot  air disappeared,here in Samoa everything seemed different back home but also seemed  to be more free.

The truck came to a stop and our excitement  sky rocketed  we were finally here at the pool,but something was different  it embedded  into the concrete and the inside of  it were fishes and smooth rocks and  it was outside and you didn't have to pay to get in .It was the strangest thing I ever saw but still manage to look significant,I dipped my toe into the water and it was cooling the relief of the cold water drained the hot temperature away from me.Slowly we all began to slowly sit down in the shallow part of the pool on a slippery rock,we all began to slide down to the water and swim through the crystal clear water.

We all then took turns jumping off the high concrete walls and diving trying to find Nemo sadly we only found Dory . We all then decided to do pack up and go back to my Uncle’s and have some lunch,when we got back we all relaxed in the shade and  played with  my uncle’s puppies .It was a long day but a fun day that I never want to forget.  

                                                                                                                                 

Flying Carpet Narrative

For my class's homework this week we had to write a narrative based on a picture with a flying carpet on it,this also was to give us some practise for our writing assessment we had on Thursday.

So hope you enjoy reading my story.

FLYING CARPET

I entered through the door of what was going to become my new room and I could no longer hold the heavy bow a carried up the stair so a put it down on the floor the room was bare and plain but the only thing in it was a colourful carpet that seemed to have lost its beauty due to a lot of dust,I ignored the carpet and walked towards the closet to start putting my stuff in it.As soon I was done unpacking something caught the corner of my eye I looked to see what it was it was in the far right corner of the closet,I picked it up it was a clear jar with what seemed to be more dust inside of it maybe the person who once lived here was obsessed with it.With the jar safely in my hand I was just about to open it when I was interrupted by the sound of my mum’s voice call from down stairs.

“Renee come and help bring all the dining room chairs please I really need your help!”she called.

“Okay mum!”I replied back.

I rushed down and accidentally dropped all the dust over the carpet but I had no time to clean it up I knew my mum will grow impatient of me so I left it.

“Thanks sweetie for the help now you can go and finish pack while I make something to eat.”mum said.

“Okay mum.”I said.

While my mum wasn't looking I quickly grabbed the broom so she wouldn't grow suspicious of me and quickly ran up to my room,I shut the door behind me and took a deep breath and turned around to see the mess I made.

My body froze and my mouth dropped along with the broom in my hand I couldn't believe what I was seeing,it was just floating there no string no nothing making it float I picked up the shattered pieces of glass on the floor and realised what it had once contained.

My carpet was floating and it was that magical dust that did it.

I swept away the glass and then I step onto the carpet and to my surprise it held me quite nicely.

“Go!”I said.

Waiting for it to take me flying around my room but nothing happened.

“Up,up and away!”I shouted.

But still nothing happened so pulled the front of the carpet toward of me for I was frustrated,then the carpet rushed forward and slammed me into the wall.I quickly got up and rushed to my door slightly dizzy to see if my mum or dad came to see what happened, thankfully my mum just asked what happened so I just told her I dropped something.

The next day my mum went left me at home just to do some grocery shopping so I decided to take another spin on the carpet around the house.I gently hop on it and stirred it out of my room down the stairs,I was floating everywhere in the house and everything was fine.All of a sudden the carpet went ballistic and started flying everywhere I quickly took hold and felt my legs being flung back,and just to make matters worse my mum entered through the door.

“What is that?”she screamed.

“I am so sorry mum.”I screamed.

“This all happened because some stupid dust...”

The dust I need to take it out of the carpet.

“Mum go get the vacuum and turn it on.”I shouted.

“Why?”she questioned.

“Just do it!”I screamed.

My mum got the vacuum and turned it on all I had to do was find a way to stop it.

“Okay mum pick up one huge rock and throw it on top of the carpet when I come your way.”I instructed.

I stirred the carpet towards my mum.

“Okay one,two,three.”

I quickly jumped off the carpet onto the floor and the carpet was under the stone I quickly got the vacuum and  cleaned the dust out of it then removed the rock,the carpet was back to normal and huge sigh of relief came to me but disappeared when I saw my mum’s face.

“You better tell me what happened and get this place cleaned up or you grounded!”she yelled.

“Mum I would rather much better be grounded.”

My Narrative

For our homework this week my class and I had to write a narrative based on a picture with a tiger in a bathroom and have to have a Title,Orientation,Problem and Solution(T.O.P.S).

Can I Please Have One?

He was at the zoo and just passing animal he had always loved but never could have,then all of a sudden there she was the most beautiful creature he have ever seen a tiger with liquorice black stripes painted across it’s warm orange coloured fur.

“ Dad can I have a tiger please!” begged Samuel

“No son because 1 we don’t have a place to keep it and 2 tigers are dangerous.”replied his dad .

“awww!”sigh Samuel.

Still disappointed  Samuel went back home and had dinner .

“Enjoying your dinner sweetie?”asked his mum.

“Would have enjoyed it more if I had a tiger with me.”matter Samuel.

“What did he say honey?”said his mum

“He’s just being a grumpy pant because I said he couldn't have a tiger.” spoke his dad

“Its okay honey we can get you a guinea pig.”reasoned his mum.

“ I DON’T WANT A GUINEA PIG I WANT A TIGER!”screamed Samuel.

Then stormed off to his room and off to bed.Morning came and the sun was slowly sipped through the curtains and Samuel got up sluggishly and dragged his feet across the floor over to his bathroom.As he turned around  instantly he saw bulging big green eyes and razor sharp teeth.

“Ahhhhhhhh!”He screamed.

Samuel turned around and shut the door tight and raced down stairs.

“ Good morning son you’re awak.... my gosh boy you soiled yourself what happened?”questioned his dad.

“Dad I don’t want a tiger any more.”

How To Play Fireboy and Watergirl

We are learning to write procedural text so we wrote a procedural text about our favourite online game.

Blog Commenting

This presentation shows how I comment on other people's blogs.

Procedural Text

We are learning about procedural text 

How To Cross The Road

You need: Your parent or caregiver to help assisted you in this Task.

What you need to do:

First you: Stop behind the the curb on the side of the road(So the cars don't get close to you when passing).

Second you:Take hold of parents or caregiver hand.

Then you: Look right and left for any cars to make sure it safe to cross.

Finally you: Walk across the road still look right and left and still holding parent or caregivers hand.

You have now crossed  the road safely.

Ancestral Poem

 Ancestral Poem

Dear Ancestor

would you be proud of her

if she gave the gift of life

but  at an age not suitable.

Dear Ancestor

would you be proud of him

if he stood up for myself

if someone didn’t like the colour of his skin

but end in a bad consequence.

Dear Ancestor

would you be proud of me

if I worked hard for my future

but sacrificed family time.

Tokelauan is my culture and I am proud of it.

My ancestor are hard working and gentle dove

Violence is never their answer.

My ancestor protect me when I awake or asleep.

Even though there are mistakes

There are lessons that I will take.

To turn a wrong into a right

There are some tough fights.

I am your daughter and

your blood that flowed down to me

now it is time for you to see

How proud you are of me.

By Salome

My Autobiography

This week I presented my autobiography in front of my class.There are some personal information that I have deleted because I am  being cyber smart.

Who Am I ?

Malo ni and Bula vinaka my name is Salome it come from the bible,but even though my mum named me Salome she meant to name me after my great great grandmother.

I am Fijian,Tokelauan and from American Samoa,my family mostly revolve around my Fijian and Tokelauan not so much Samoan life. I'm not a speaker of my language but do understand a little Tokelauan,being Fijian meant going to church every Sunday and having bible study every Saturday so Christianity is a big part of my life and family.

I’ll be honest I don’t like public speaking  but I do like doing art and reading

Education History

I started going to kindergarten at the age of two years old to four years old.In 2005 I started at my first school which was Glendowie Primary and stayed there for a year and then went to St Heliers with my brother and sister the next year.I was in St Heliers from 2006 to 2011 and then came here to Tamaki Primary with my cousin.

Most memorable moments

The memorable moments in my life was when I went to Tokelau and saw the house my mum grew up in and the house my grandpa built,the other memorable moment was going to Fiji to meet all my first cousins and see the house my dad grew up in too.  

Aspirations

My aspiration that I want to be is to become a surgeon the reason for this is because I want to help people and not just some people I want to help people from the pacific islands who need help in their health.

Inspirations

My most inspiring person is my mum because she helped figure out what I want to be when I'm older.She really didn't tell me become a doctor she more showed me,my mum is a nurse so when she tells me stories of how things work as a nurse and how some things can be hard for the people she helps.So this made badly wanted to become a doctor to make a better future for pacific people who need a good doctor.

Inspiring Quote

“Sir, my concern is not whether God is on our side; my greatest concern is to be on God's side, for God is always right.” - Abraham Lincoln

Tree Poem

This term we are learning to use a poetic language in out writing.

I am using metaphors in my poem about tree hope you enjoy it. 

My Goal Settings for 2013

These are my Goals I wish to accomplish this year for 2013.