My Narrative

For our homework this week my class and I had to write a narrative based on a picture with a tiger in a bathroom and have to have a Title,Orientation,Problem and Solution(T.O.P.S).

Can I Please Have One?

He was at the zoo and just passing animal he had always loved but never could have,then all of a sudden there she was the most beautiful creature he have ever seen a tiger with liquorice black stripes painted across it’s warm orange coloured fur.

“ Dad can I have a tiger please!” begged Samuel

“No son because 1 we don’t have a place to keep it and 2 tigers are dangerous.”replied his dad .

“awww!”sigh Samuel.

Still disappointed  Samuel went back home and had dinner .

“Enjoying your dinner sweetie?”asked his mum.

“Would have enjoyed it more if I had a tiger with me.”matter Samuel.

“What did he say honey?”said his mum

“He’s just being a grumpy pant because I said he couldn't have a tiger.” spoke his dad

“Its okay honey we can get you a guinea pig.”reasoned his mum.

“ I DON’T WANT A GUINEA PIG I WANT A TIGER!”screamed Samuel.

Then stormed off to his room and off to bed.Morning came and the sun was slowly sipped through the curtains and Samuel got up sluggishly and dragged his feet across the floor over to his bathroom.As he turned around  instantly he saw bulging big green eyes and razor sharp teeth.

“Ahhhhhhhh!”He screamed.

Samuel turned around and shut the door tight and raced down stairs.

“ Good morning son you’re awak.... my gosh boy you soiled yourself what happened?”questioned his dad.

“Dad I don’t want a tiger any more.”